Troll Writing

Sentence challenge!Spot the four mistakes in this sentence.the roof ov the yellow house wos ripped off by the enormous troll

The roof of the yellow house was ripped off by the enormous troll.

Sick sentences!These sentences are ‘sick’ and need help to get better. Can you help?

The troll put his hand on the house. He had a nose and teeth. He was covered in grass.

The troll put his huge hand on the triangular house. He had a wonky long nose and dirty yellow teeth. He was covered in slimy grass.

This is some of the writing that is related to Dragon Writing. These are problems one and two. I will be posting the 3rd one soon.
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