Tuesday 17 December 2019

First Foot On The Moon

It feels like stepping onto a bolder.
It sounded like nothing.
Felt like I won the Olympics.
I tasted like a dry mouth.
What would you do if you made a poem of first step on the moon?

1 comment:


  1. Hi Theo,

    It’s Leisha here from the Summer Learning Journey. I hope you are having a great holiday so far!

    Tino pai - you have written a great poem! I love how you described it would feel like you had won the Olympics. I agree, it would have been an amazing feeling, knowing you were the very first man to walk on the moon! I’m sure there would have been mixed feelings of relief, happiness and excitement. If you had the chance, would you like to go to the moon?

    Did you enjoy this activity? I am looking forward to reading more of your posts over the next couple of weeks!

    Leisha
    :)

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful comment.